Robert you helped me with this assignment, but the teacher did not approve. Some changes need to be ...

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Robert you helped me with this assignment, but the teacher did not approve. Some changes need to be made--I am posting a new question so you can help me with it. It needs to be done regarding the 2 artworks I attached, the paper need to be a little more critique (but enough so it is justifiable, and brings up the positive as well) and the introduction they said was too vague. They wanted it to be more detailed and include the 2 works in the introduction. One of the references you used wasn't tin the exhibition, that is why they asked for a new one. See attached pictures of it below--and the names. https://hammer.ucla.edu/exhibitions/2024/breathe-toward-climate-and-social-justice https://viaartfund.org/grants/cannupa-hanska-luger-sovereign/ "Apisculpture" by Garnett Puett (Bees) Cannupa Hanska Luger: Sovereign