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Please see specific comments at left; see the "view feedback" button to view these comments. Please do not write comments or questions on your document or below; instead, email with any questions.  --Content: Clearly addresses all of the requirements of the assignment. Symptoms, effects, and causes of the problem are fully developed, including numbers-based evidence for symptoms and effects. Problem statement includes necessary elements.  Comments for Content: Most paragraphs need examples and analysis to prove the ideas in two paragraphs per section not fewer.  --Format: Easy to read with short, descriptive, parallel headings, and effective use of white space. Format conforms to assignment directions handout including proper memo heading and subheadings.  Comments for Format: see issues marked on your document.  --Organization: Information is presented clearly and logically. Opening sentences specifically preview headings and identify paper's purpose. The concluding paragraph clearly summarizes the problem statement including its cause and effect. The offer to research a solution is included. Paragraphs contain logical and descriptive topic sentences.  Comments for Organization: Some issues with topic sentences.  --Mechanics and Grammar: Sentences are skillfully constructed, varied, concise, and active. Word choice is specific and business-appropriate. Memo conforms to standards of grammar, spelling, and punctuation throughout.  Comments for Mechanics and Grammar: Clarity and conciseness issues.  On Time? Yes Any Plagiarism issues? No/disregard.