I have completed the assignment. However, I need to improve it by following the instructions below a ...

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I have completed the assignment. However, I need to improve it by following the instructions below and the recommendations given by the TA. TA recommendations: "A couple of things I'd like to highlight: First, you identified numerous problems, making it hard to focus and analyze in-depth. This is probably because the IO goal you centered on was too generic and broad. Recommendations were extremely vague. They should be actionable suggestions rather than normative appeals, and rebuttals should address the key obstacles that could hinder the proposed solutions. Besides, the summary was too long. Lastly, on writing style, please use highlighted topic sentences."