I am returning Essay 1 for major revisions, development, and citations of sources throughout your pa ...

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I am returning Essay 1 for major revisions, development, and citations of sources throughout your paper. Please see my comments. I will be submitting my copy and also the copy of what he says needs to be fixed! Throughout the text he wants the quotations and everything to be cited. Please read carefully and cite anything you use from the text. I will also provide his instructions as well. Also do not make the words wordy, make the words believable to read when reading a paper. I have attached the readings below so that you can cite the sources. Writers’ reactions to the American Wilderness as Reflected in the Writings of William Bradford, Thomas Morton, and William Byrd II Content of the Essay 1) Begin the body of your essay with a brief introduction to the selections in our text or other relevant outside information. Draw upon notes from your introduction, citing your editor(s) as the author. 2) Use short quotations worked into the text of your own analytical sentences to provide support for the paragraphs. You may also bring into the discussion any relevant outside information as long as you cite the source within your paragraphs. 3) Each topic sentence should be a claim that adds support to your thesis. Stylistic Standards Avoid using "I," "you," and any references to "the reader." These terms create wordiness and misdirection. Use present tense and active voice verbs when referring to the author's contributions (like this: "Hawthorne notes," "Douglass claims," "Franklin suggests"). William Bradford: “Of Plimoth Plantation” (Chapter 10, “Thomas Morton Affair” Sections 284-292) https://www.gutenberg.org/files/24950/24950-h/2495... Thomas Morton: “New English Canaan” (The Natives of New England: Chapters 2-20) https://www.gutenberg.org/files/54162/54162-h/5416... William Byrd, II: “Secret History of the Dividing Line” (Burlesque of the “Lubberlanders,” page 54) https://ia601804.us.archive.org/24/items/williamby...