Hi, my teacher ask me to write a empirical research paper but she wanted first to see an outline. Wh ...

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Hi, my teacher ask me to write a empirical research paper but she wanted first to see an outline. When I sent it to her she sent it back with a lot of feed back. I want you please to go over the outline and the feedback and correct the outline to match with the teacher comments . Please before you start fixing make sure you know how the empirical paper is written as it is different from the normal research paper. Please make sure to use easy English words so I can understand and make sure that you follow the correct way of writing an empirical paper. Once you send me the outline with the comment and problem fixed I will send it back to her. i tried to read the prof hand writing and i wrote it in here: - do trade liberalization policies lead to growth level of income inequality in developing countries? - this may be secondary research question that needs attention separately given the answer is predicate on the first answered as "yes" you are assuming it will be. - too much as an empirical issue -some background may be appropriate but it should be quite brief - leave this for the methods section - not thesis this is an assertion - research question should be the focus of the introduction - i still think this is too much of get to a ----- answer you have in mind.- hypotheses to be tested -learn of how an empirical paper is structured in is Q,the Apsr, Jop or other journals. -this will change as the scop of the paper changes.