Description i tried to read the prof  hand writing and i wrote it in here: - do trade liberalizat ...

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Description i tried to read the prof  hand writing and i wrote it in here: - do trade liberalization policies lead to great level of income inequality in developing countries? - this may be secondary research question that needs attention separately given the answer is predicate on the first answered as "yes" you are assuming it will be. - too much as an empirical issue -some background may be appropriate but it should be quite brief - leave this for the methods section  - not thesis this is an assertion  - research question should be the  focus of the introduction - i still think this is too much of get to a ----- answer you have in mind.- hypotheses to be tested  -learn of how an empirical paper is structured in is Q,the Apsr, Jop or other journals. -this will change as the scop of the paper changes.