Description Hey Francis, my prof added these comments to the policy brief you helped me with, pleas ...

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Description Hey Francis, my prof added these comments to the policy brief you helped me with, please take these into account when making your revisions, I want all points to be fixed accordingly : “This would be 85%. See comments below as you work on submission 2. Title page should be completed or removed. Policy brief is a little long, so as you revise work to ensure that your points are as concise as possible. More in-text citations are needed. A number of key points remain uncited. One example is that population growth is a cause of lack of access to clean drinking water. Correlation does not mean causation, so find a source to use as evidence. There are also some sections with few citations. Add date (2024) for source of charts based on the WB database. Give charts a chart number. Chart on p. 5 lacks source. How has access to clean water changed over time (longer period) in Uganda? .You discuss consequences of the issue in the beginning and end of the background section; I recommend reorganizing so consequences are together. You may find it interesting to differentiate access to basic vs. safely managed drinking water, since the WDI database provides both for Uganda. In terms of background information, where are people getting their drinking water from? What does infrastructure have to do with the issue? For all programs: when was the social enterprise founded? Program 1: Are the sales exclusively for drinking water and the other facilities are free? Is the water only by ATM or are there more delivery systems? Or is everything pay-per-use? Any information re: cost? Is this a for-profit social enterprise? Program 2: we need Uganda-specific data.