Description Great job on this rough draft! You did a thorough exploration of the history and symbol ...

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Description Great job on this rough draft! You did a thorough exploration of the history and symbolism behind pupusas. Throughout the blog, you have a fun and engaging writing style that connects with the reader. For the final draft, I'd love to see you make a stronger personal connection to pupusas. In the first paragraph, you mention a childhood memory correlated with eating pupusas, which is a great detail! Under your section heading "Personal Significance," the focus seems to be more about the history of Pupusas. How can you incorporate the personal significance more concretely? For the final draft, also make sure that you are uploading the correct images and/or that they are viewable to the reader.